Bottle-d~

Bottles by Borg de Nobel

there were stars up
-empty hemisphere
lay bottle-d in my chest

all night i listen

and memories drizzle
over vodka fumes
-dreamy sentiments-

time remembered
over scrapped oil-paint

©Mohana Das

Linked to D’verse Poetics

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29 thoughts on “Bottle-d~

  1. “–empty hemisphere lay bottle-d in my chest”…sounds melancholy..especially with the “vodka fumes”…a lot inferred here, Mohana, and, as usual for you, beautifully said.

  2. “there were stars up
    -empty hemisphere
    lay bottle-d in my chest”
    A pain, a loss with half of the world missing, despite the commitment to the canvass to be created and completed together!

  3. I have to agree that memories drizzle over vodka fumes is fantastic… I like how you took the image of the bottles and did something unexpected with it. Lovely poem

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