There they fall, eddy
-ing across an unloved moon-
ghostly chiaroscuro.

The rain whispers cold
you have secrets in your eyes
veined, a trembling morphine-green.

©Mohana Das

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11 thoughts on “Falling~

  1. There are some real gems in this week’s prompt- this is one of them. Great, great job here Mohana. A lot are loving the second verse, and for good reason- it’s brilliant; but the first sets the tone for the rest. This is fantastic. -Mike

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