home lies beyond the storm
-sour fetească zapping
in the necrotic air-
“nu va fi lumină, nu?” her
voice is lost in
a rainless mouth
as she steps,
faceless, into infinity
©Mohana Das
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insanebloom 
I especially like the last line- lovely poem.
You caught me spellbound with those words. Beautiful poem. One that I will be saving for a long time. 🙂
” her
voice is lost in
a rainless mouth”…. leaves us wondering… beautiful.
I also find this line astonishing.
Home lies beyond the storm…so true. Beautiful piece.
Mohana, this has such a lovely feel to it. Nicely penned!
faceless, into infinity… powerful and haunting.
It got me thinking: which language is that? 😉
xx
Romanian! Dunno why but the image made me think of Romania 🙂
Beautiful words.
Anna :o]
lovely write Mohana…till she reaches beyond the storm.
Wow! Brilliant write! I love the closing lines!
her
voice is lost in
a rainless mouth….i love that….
🙂
Yes, this is beautiful… and I had to check the Romanian to… beautiful mix of languages.. and yes:
voice is lost in a rainless mouth… is a great line
An image, a moment in time and you’ve done it so well. Like the new look to your site.
Images sometimes hold so much…moments that might just dissipate if touched.
Lovely poem!
I had to do some googling but once I understood the references, I was astounded by the beauty of the poem.
Thank you, Beth!