you hold the moon inside
quartered-
a shiver defeated
speared in my heart
the colors of night air
asleep- you’re my
modern-day Narcissus
warped in marble Echo-
i hang out of focus
©Mohana Das
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insanebloom 
I saw a kind of god, too…
I love your opening lines…..makes one wonder about the back-story. I looked for an image “hung out of focus”!
Mohana your work always touches me…there is such openness to it…whether in joy or pain. This piece is so moving…just beautiful
Thank you, Susie!
A nice flow to it Mohana! Wonderful write!
Hank
Briskly effective; well done.
I have hung out of focus on many an occasion. Sigh.
Deliciously succint. “You are my modern day Narcissus”.
Lovely, just lovely!
Anna :o]