I, with ♥
I’m like the wordless echoes of hope in broken hearts.
I’m like the rain-drenched fallen brown leaf.
I’m like the solitary dew-drop on a lotus’ cheek.
I’m like the green shadow of ancient trees.
I’m like the lonely twinkle of a star on the darkest of nights.
I’m like the undeciphered whispers of the evening breeze.
I’m like the wild frothy waves of the tempestous ocean.
I’m like the warmth with which cool rivers kiss the unknown sea.
I’m like the forlorn bud on a naked tree.
I’m like the scattered dust blowing free.
I’m like the scorching heat of burning desert sands.
I’m like the delicate mystery in the cobweb’s gossammer strands.
I’m like the sweet tune that lulls a child to sleep.
I’m like the silken moisture of your lost lover’s lips.
I’m like the irregular beats of a frenzied heart.
I’m like that singular smile that can sear souls apart.
I’m like the rain after eons of drought.
I’m like the wave of rage that destroys life.
I’m like the Silence on untold Love’s lips.
I’m like the tears…and the smiles they breath.
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Mohana, you take our breath away with your writings… Wonderful
Thank you so much, Nana! Its my pleasure you love my work. 🙂
Mohanna, You remind me of myself when I was young. You have so much enthusiasm and it is a pleasure to read your writing. I will visit here more often.
Thank you, Renee, for all your appreciation! 🙂
You have such a wonder and flow to your work. Just outstanding.
Thank you! By God’s grace, I will try to write more beautifully.
You’ve been nominated for the Versatile Blogger Award 🙂
https://clsostarich.wordpress.com/2011/11/14/versatile-blogger-award/
Thank you so much!! 🙂
Hello, dropped in to read your poetry and after reading through several I have decided they do not deserve a “quick read” so I bookmarked your blog and plan on returning and enjoying your poems when I can relax and spend some time with them. Thanks again for visiting my blog as well. Keep writing!
Purple,
Thank you so much for stopping by. Hope to read more of your writings too.
Your poem about you reminds me of ancient Celtic poetry. I really enjoyed the repetition and the sense of building. You’re a good poet.
Thank you so much.
Mohana!
This is to notify you that I’m sharing your site on my blog. In response to various blogger awards I decided to make my own permanent recognition page for other blogs I love. You are on the list of links. Here is the link: http://fromscott.wordpress.com/favorites/
Thanks a lot, Scott!! I’m honored.
I read it at least 3 times… and it’s beautiful! truly beautiful!
I’m overwhelmed, Nanda. Thank you so much!
I am delighted to have made your acquaintance.
I have subscribed so that I can read more
David
My honour, David.
This is simply beautiful, Mohana. I look forward to reading more of your poetry.
Thank you!
Ethel and I nominated you for the Liebster Blog Award. Check details out on fourwindowspress.com and enjoy sharing the award with other bloggers. We love your poetry.
Tom and Ethel Davis
Thank you, Tom, Ethel.
Mohana loved reading ur work.
Thank you!!!
Your work goes deep, like fingernails torn to the quick. Excellent. Glad I stopped by for a visit–will see you again!
I am glad too 🙂
You’ve been nominated for the Versatile Blogger Award…thank you for verse blogging!
http://neelthemuse.wordpress.com/2011/12/01/versatile-blogger-award/
Mohana, unable to file my comments on your “Blood Butterfly” post today due to the firewall at this location that blocks anything with the syllable “butt” in part of the title! Anyway, I commend this poem for its many dense layers of intense reactions to the forces of nature there where the poet is located and has been located. Some writings by Vietnam POWs I knew many years ago express many of these same thoughts, it would seem. I appreciate the reminders you posted here today!
Mohana, another nomination for the Versatile Blogger Award! Keep sharing the good writing!
This is a beautiful poem about you.
your creative words are very very nice to read.
david in maine
Gorgeous, gorgeous words, Mohana. So breath-takingly beautiful and vivid! So glad dVerse brought me to your writings.
Glad to meet you too!!
Your words shall be treasured for a long while. I don’t quite know how I got here, but I’m glad I did.
you are the words and ways of life itself 😉 blessing 😉
Thank you so much, Sir!
Pleasant! Simple! Pleasant! Simple! all i can think of! You have a warm and a pleasant simplicity surrounded by you! I could never write a poem on me, perhaps describing me, if i have to i would let you write one for me, haha! I hope you would do that 😀
Thats sweet of you…thanks!! 🙂
Wonderful Mohana too good.
Thank you so much, Rathina!
mohana, ur each n every post is unique n superb.. no words to say… just keep blogging…
Thank you, Abhishek!
Hey Mohana i have an award for you at my blog , you write so well , go grab it 🙂 http://thepleasantlyplump.blogspot.com
Nice thoughts…Like it 🙂
Keep writing.. visiting again soon 🙂
You write beautifully Mohana! I loved the imagery in this one…. 🙂
after reading this … i wonder now… if there is any of your verses which i or anyone else could not find nice … :)…
Keep up the good work, Mohana !! GOD bless you !!
Thank you so much!! 🙂
Mohana – Don’t think I can add more appreciation what everyone has already furnished about your thoughts. However , I always believe that to understand the Motive of our life is the most difficult task in this whole world ! Spend sometime with yourself that’s all I can say.
Cheers
Amit
Thank you for your kind words! I agree it is a difficult thing coming to terms with our own selves, but hopefully someday there will be light.
what a delicately painted self-portrait, Mohana. i’m really glad to have discovered your blog. your words fill my soul with so much light and inspiration. thank you~
Thank you so much, Yelena!! It is wonderful to have such a lovely friend in you 🙂
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Thanks
Amandeep singh
With words, a myriad hues painted,
what I read differs
from what your write;
writers unite. (!!!)
Stumbled onto your blog and I love the poetry going on here! Cheers!
Thank you 🙂
Beautiful self-expression. Your words have a mystical way with how they unfold.
Thank you 🙂
Beautiful poetry. The anaphora just drives the meaning home. 🙂
thank you, Tina!
HI ,
i guess ur one of the winners for the Melbourne now contest,
i won the same contest via their Facebook promotion n just wanted to know if uve heard from them ,
or have any details ,
disha ramani ,
kotak.disha@gmail.com
thanks !
My thoughts were glued to the verses above!
Surreal
Congratulations, I nominated you for an award! 🙂 http://destroyeddestiny.wordpress.com/2013/04/10/very-inspiring-blogger-award/
Thank you Laurien! ❤
Amaze health care her with growth
Lovely poem Mohana!
Thank you, Pankti!! 🙂
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Really pleased to have found this blog, you have some fine pieces here.
Really great stuff. Please shoot me an email — I have a request =]
mike@9trainpress.com
-mike
Simply beautiful 🙂
Loved every word! Glad to have dropped by! 🙂
hey insane, i hardly look at sites recommended by wordpress, but glad i did yours. your poetry, photography, art are phenomenal!! way too many good things i’ve seen to “like” and “comment” on all. just suffice to know i love most everything i’ve seen so far. keep up the fantastic work. i’m following and looking forward to reading every word and looking intently into every picture. peace and dreams, bob
Thank you so much, Bob!
Hey,
Request if you can share your email ID with me.
Regards,
Akshita Mehra
you inspire http://thelanguagewespeak.wordpress.com/2014/07/07/inspired-part-1-of-2/
In love with your blog..
From one Mohana to other. ❤
Thank you! 🙂
I wanted to stop over and see who it was who wrote the poem today with such fire. 🙂
Hi! I am so happy you liked my poem today 🙂
And welcome to my little blog.
That was a profound intro !!
Glad to be visiting your space !!
Thank you 🙂
You are welcome to my space when you have your time 🙂