Holding rain in
my dancing red skirt,
flower-sun grey, adagio of
tipsy drops, innocent
laughter on pavements
framing arched-antimony,
sanity cacophonous trills
these old cobblestone clicks, and
I sing,
of everything you said,
of everything quiet on your lips.
©Mohana Das
insanebloom 
I love the way this sounds:
sanity cacophonous trills
these old cobblestone clicks
This is lovely.
water colour sketch in words. cute
Beautiful words. Nicely done!
I sing,
of everything you said,
of everything quiet on your lips.
love the last lines, well done.
nice blends! I like 🙂
happy gooseberry day!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/12/19/in-the-silence/
Very lovely!
Impossible to read this and not smile 🙂
David
“I sing of everything quiet on ;your lips.” Yes, we sometimes must sing what the other person “beams” into our hearts!
hot and lovely one.
you rock.
have a fun holiday.
Holding rain in
my dancing red skirt,………..nice
May the earth get up in her brown and green skirt and start dancing with the sky-blue oceans as the sun shines and the clouds laugh! What a delightful poem.